On wednesday we were waiting for the people because we were going on a waka Trip everyone was so excited and then when the people came we all went with the people to the car and then we started to go and when we were there we had to put life jackets on because we might fall in the water so we started paddle when we started paddling he had to say some wolds so we can paddle when we turned around and when we finished on the waka we got to say some words about the waka if we had fun on the waka after we finished on the waka we had to take off our life jackets when all of our life jackets were off we had to go to the parents so we can go have lunch then it was time to go home.
In writing we are learning to write recounts
Something I did well was using w details in my opening.
Something I need to work on is using interesting details
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